给大家简单讲一下考研作文的评分标准:
第五档（9～10）分：很好地完成了试题规定的任务。包含所有内容要点；使用丰富的语法结构和词汇；语言自然流畅，语法错误极少；有效地使用多种衔接手法；格式与语域恰当贴切。
第四档（7～8）分：较好地完成了试题规定的任务。包含所有内容要点，允许漏掉一两个要点；使用较丰富的语法结构和词汇；语言基本准确，允许有个别错误；采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；格式与语域较恰当。
第三档（5～6）分：虽漏掉一些内容，但包含多数内容要点；应用的语言和词汇结构能满足任务的要求；有一些语法及词汇错误，但不影响理解；采用了简单的衔接手法，内容连惯；格式与语域基本合理。
第二档（3～4）分：未能按要求完成试题规定的任务。
第一档（1～2）分：未完成试题规定的任务。
根据上述的具体评分标准，可以看出小作文仍然采用总体评分法，先根据文章内容和语言确定所属档次，然后再具体给分。阅卷专家对各个档次做出了非常形象生动的总结：五档“漂漂亮亮”，四档“整整齐齐”，三档“马马虎虎”，二档“乱七八糟”，一档“一塌糊涂”。

修改时间：周1-5修改，周末休息~ 3天之内修改完.请耐心等待~~
每一期可以多次写，如果对自己第一次写的不满意，可以写第2次

第8期小作文题目,时间9月1号-14号

求学信

Directions:

You want to study at a certain foreign university. Write a letter to

1)       ask about the situation there as regards accommodation and fees,

2)       possible scholarships, and

3)       what qualifications one needs for acceptance.

范文：

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a Chinese student who wishes to apply for admission into your prestigious university. My plan is to start my course next term, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.

First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I already have a bachelor’s degree from Beijing Foreign Studies University, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements. Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students. Third, what is the situation as regards accommodation?

I look forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

尊敬的先生或女士：

    我是一名中国学生，希望向您这所著名大学申请入学。我计划下学期开始我的课程，如果您能好心提供一些基本信息，我将非常感谢。

    首先，我在您的大学听课需要什么条件？我已经从北京外国语大学获得学士学位，但我想知道是否有进一步的学术要求。其次，学费是多少？尽管我打算自费，但我想了解一下是否国外学生可以获得奖学金。最后，住宿情况怎么样？

    我期待着您的答复，并且希望进入您这所著名大学。

                                                     您真诚的，

                                                     李明

第7期 时间8月16-31 (结束了，不要写了。谢谢)
第七期作文题目要求为：Directions:
You are preparing for an English test and are in need of some reference books. Write a letter to the sales department of a bookstore to ask for:

1)      detailed information about the books you want,

2)      methods of payment,

3)      time and way of delivery

这是王江涛老师提供的参考范文

Dear Sir or Madam,

As I am planning to take the National Entrance Test of English for MA/MS Candidates (NETEM) , I have decided to place an order of some NETEM books with due consideration of the good reputation of your bookstore and the high quality of your books.

Firstly, please give me particular accounts as regards names, authors, publishing houses and prices of these books. Secondly, I also need to know the terms of payment and after-sell service. Thirdly, I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver these books by EMS to the headquarters of Beijing New Oriental School by September 1, 2008.

I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my requests. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

                                              Yours sincerely,

                                              Li Ming

  
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第6期 时间8月1-16(已经结束了，不要写了)
As part of a student social survey project, you are leading a group to visit an exhibition in a small town. Write a letter to ask for information regarding such things as:
1)       the contents of the exhibition.
2)       The dates of its opening and closing , and
3)       Any discounts.
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五期作文批改题目为(已经结束了，不要写了)
1) make an apology, and
2)suggest a solution
You should write about 100 words.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
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第四期作文题目(4期结束了~要再写了)：
One of your pen pals will shortly be visiting your city. For some reason, you cannot manage to meet him/her as the airport on time. Write a letter to him/her to

     1) explain the reasons,

     2) ask him/her to wait for you at the airport, and

     3) tell him/her how to identify you.
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第3期题目 活动持续时间为：2010.06.18至2010.07.05(3期结束了~要再写了)
Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service. You should write about 100 words
Do not sign your name at the end of the letter. Use“Li Ming”instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)
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第2期题目 活动持续时间为：2010.06.01至2010.06.17(2期结束了，不要再写了)
You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan. Write your letter in no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use“Li Ming”instead.
Don’t write the address. (10 points)
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第一期的题目是:10分作文(第一期作文已经结束了~~请大家不要在写了)
Directions:
Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology.
Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address.？ (10 points)

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太好了,占个座

Dear Mr. Wang

I am sorry to say that I will quit an editor that I have worked for two mouths .

Athough the job is good and I learn a lot ,this is not my ideal work .First ,I am not good as an editor .The jod takes me into pressure deeply ,and makes me out of breath .Secondly ,the salary is less than what I expert .Thirdly , relationships of colleague that are disharmonisch make me depressed.

I am apologitic for inconvenience to which I lead .Please forgive me decision. 

Your sincerly

LiMing

naonaonaonao校长：请不吝厉言 吾当感激涕零  

Dear Mr.Wang I am sorry to make the decision to quit the job as an editor for the magzine. Much as I have learnt here, it is not my ideal job. As an editor, I have to work for too much time beyond my energy. I am too tired to live a nomal life because of the heavy-burden work. Moreover, as an edit,I have a lot of pressure, for it is not really the sort of job i want to do. Besides, The salary for this work is a little low than that in my mind. All in all, I do not want to live such a hard life with a low salary. I am apologizing for the inconvenience to you. I would appreciate it if you can understand my situation. Yours sincerely Li Ming

请老师帮忙批改下，嗷嗷~~

I feel very honored and glad to come to your company. During my stay here and work here, I learn a lot of knowledge and resons. Thank you for colleagues and friends around me, I improved a lot.>>

But I don't think I am a very good designer. I have many weakness in many aspects, such as picking mateial, and other concepts are the main reasons to restrict me and make me tired. So, to avoid greater loss of the company and myself, I decide to leave(resign).>>

Also thanks to Mr Wang for the great suppore and correction to my job,thanks again.>>

I decide to quit, terribly sorry!

>                                                      Liming>

真好 ，O(∩_&capO谢谢啊

老师，感谢您的修改，批我的作文让您受罪了，感谢您的建议，我会认真执行的，不枉您的辛劳。

Dear Mr.Wang,

After a long time of thinking, I see no other alternative than to resign my position as editor for Designs&Fashions. Needless to say, it's not an easy decision.

Thank you for giving me this opportunity, the job was really good and taught me a lot. But I have found the disappointed fact that it was not what I expected. It gave me great pressure and occupied too much time, but I really need to spend more time with my family.

I apologize for any inconvenience caused by my sudden resignation. Please accept my thanks for your support and help. My best wishes for the company's continued growth.

Sincerely,

Li Ming 

老师们辛苦了～麻烦帮我改下吧！