Paolo到Phoebe那儿去做按摩，并试图勾引Phoebe,这让Phoebe很恼火，Phoebe不想欺骗Rachel,便把实情告诉了她。知道Paolo背叛了她，Rachel又气愤又伤心，她把Paolo的行李扔到了大街上，跟他一刀两断。Ross在Joey和Chandler的鼓励下前去安慰Rachel, 本想借机和Rachel发展感情，可是Rachel的一席话给他浇了一头冷水，我对男人已经厌烦了，我不想再看到男人...

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Phoebe: Um, um, Rachel, can we talk for a sec?

Rachel: Well, sure...just for a sec, though, 'cause Paolo on his way over.

Phoebe: Oh!(sits down) Ok,um, ok, um.

Rachel: Oh, Pheebs, Pheebs...

Phoebe: Ok, um, (clear throat) we haven't known each other for that long a time, and , um, there are things that you should know about me. One, my friends are the most important thing in my life, two, I never lie, and three, I make the best oatmeal raisin cookies in the world. (Phoebe opens a tin and offers Rachel a cookie.)

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Phoebe: Um, um, Rachel, can we talk for a sec?

Rachel: Well, sure...just for a sec, though, 'cause Paolo on his way over.

Phoebe: Oh!(sits down) Ok,um, ok, um.

Rachel: Oh, Pheebs, Pheebs...

Phoebe: Ok, um, (clear throat) we haven't known each other for that long a time, and , um, there are things that you should know about me. One, my friends are the most important thing in my life, two, I never lie, and three, I make the best oatmeal raisin cookies in the world. (Phoebe opens a tin and offers Rachel a cookie.)

请老师指教～～

Phoebe: Um, um, Rachel, can we talk for a sec?

Rachel: Well, sure...just for a sec, though, 'cause Paolo on his way over.

Phoebe: Oh!(sits down) Ok,um, ok, um.

Rachel: Oh, Pheebs, Pheebs...

Phoebe: Ok, um, (clear throat) we haven't known each other for that long a time, and , um, there are things that you should know about me. One, my friends are the most important thing in my life, two, I never lie, and three, I make the best oatmeal raisin cookies in the world. (Phoebe opens a tin and offers Rachel a cookie.)

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geniuswu06 写:

点评：

非常好，phoebe那段再加入点感情就更好了，那种吞吞吐吐的感觉没有把握到

老师请点评

Phoebe: Um, um, Rachel, can we talk for a sec?

Rachel: Well, sure...just for a sec, though, 'cause Paolo on his way over.

Phoebe: Oh!(sits down) Ok,um, ok, um.

Rachel: Oh, Pheebs, Pheebs...

Phoebe: Ok, um, (clear throat) we haven't known each other for that long a time, and , um, there are things that you should know about me. One, my friends are the most important thing in my life, two, I never lie, and three, I make the best oatmeal raisin cookies in the world. (Phoebe opens a tin and offers Rachel a cookie.)

请老师指教~~~

Phoebe: Um, um, Rachel, can we talk for a sec?

Rachel: Well, sure...just for a sec, though, 'cause Paolo on his way over.

Phoebe: Oh!(sits down) Ok,um, ok, um.

Rachel: Oh, Pheebs, Pheebs...

Phoebe: Ok, um, (clear throat) we haven't known each other for that long a time, and , um, there are things that you should know about me. One, my friends are the most important thing in my life, two, I never lie, and three, I make the best oatmeal raisin cookies in the world. (Phoebe opens a tin and offers Rachel a cookie.)

Phoebe: Um, um, Rachel, can we talk for a sec?

Rachel: Well, sure...just for a sec, though, 'cause Paolo on his way over.

Phoebe: Oh!(sits down) Ok,um, ok, um.

Rachel: Oh, Pheebs, Pheebs...

Phoebe: Ok, um, (clear throat) we haven't known each other for that long a time, and , um, there are three things that you should know about me. One, my friends are the most important thing in my life, two, I never lie, and three, I make the best oatmeal raisin cookies in the world. (Phoebe opens a tin and offers Rachel a cookie.)

谢谢老师~

请老师点评，第一次，做得不好请多指教！

请多多指教,谢谢